Might I suggest a new home page for cucumbertown?
It's extremely well done - very pretty, a lot of fun things happening.
It's also far too busy. I couldn't tell what I was supposed to see. Too many things moving and drawing my eyes away from actually reading. Too much scrolling. I closed it without trying to "come on in" even though I am likely in your target market.
It's a cool showcase of what you can do with HTML. Not so good for marketing a product.
It's also far too busy. I couldn't tell what I was supposed to see. Too many things moving and drawing my eyes away from actually reading. Too much scrolling. I closed it without trying to "come on in" even though I am likely in your target market.
It's a cool showcase of what you can do with HTML. Not so good for marketing a product.